Tuesday, November 19, 2013
Tuesday, October 29, 2013
Encyclopedia entry #4
Princesses
When I think of princesses I think about how when I was younger my favorite movie was Barbie and the nut cracker. In the movie Barbie was a princess and there was a scene where she was sleeping on a couch with one arm hanging off of the side of the couch, after seeing that movie I would always go to sleep with one arm hanging off of my bed so that I could aleep like a princess.
Willow Creek
I love willow Creek. I love going there with mu friends to go to the river, but I also love going there wih my family. We go in the summer when it is still warm enough to swim, and have the funnest time there jumping off of rocks, playing game's in the water, eating the fruits that grow there, and just hanging out together
When I think of princesses I think about how when I was younger my favorite movie was Barbie and the nut cracker. In the movie Barbie was a princess and there was a scene where she was sleeping on a couch with one arm hanging off of the side of the couch, after seeing that movie I would always go to sleep with one arm hanging off of my bed so that I could aleep like a princess.
Willow Creek
I love willow Creek. I love going there with mu friends to go to the river, but I also love going there wih my family. We go in the summer when it is still warm enough to swim, and have the funnest time there jumping off of rocks, playing game's in the water, eating the fruits that grow there, and just hanging out together
In the garden
In the garden after midnight, came a scream, one like the scream of a coyote. The scream was followed by a deep sucking sound from the slimy muck beyond the garden wall. Next came the squeak of wet boots past the cellar door. The next day I found a cabbage that weighed around 600 pounds.
Thursday, September 26, 2013
personal map story
I was four and a half, we were in Kmart shopping for my sisters bike,
then I saw it. It was a pink bike with all of the Disney Princesses
and had pink and purple streamers coming out of the ends of the handle
bars. When I got home I was so excited to ride it! It was so fun and I
thought of it as a huge step up from my old red tricycle, so I felt
really good about myself. But then I got bored with it like every kid
with a new toy; they play with it for a couple of days then they get
bored and forget about it.
A
while later I looked out the window to see my brother and sister riding
their bikes outside, with only two wheels. I thought about my bike and
how I had only rode it with training wheels; I then knew that no matter
how hard it was going to be, I would learn how to ride my bike with only
two wheels.
The next day I had my dad take my training wheels off. I walked to the
top of the hill and sat on my bike, I could see my entire neighborhood
from the top of the hill, it was so colorful with all of the flowers on
the blooming bushes in my driveway, and my neighbors bamboo, I could
hear the ringing of the booies in Trinidad bay. I was thinking about how
my siblings and parents would be so proud of me after I told them about
my big accomplishment, I lifted my feet onto the pedals and the bike
slowly started to move, it quickly sped up. I was going so fast I felt
like I was in a car, with the wind blowing in my hair. I was so proud of
myself and when I past my house at the bottom of the hill I saw my
brother standing in the driveway and he yelled to me “when did you learn
how to ride with two wheels”? and I yelled back “today”! I turned the
corner onto Vanwycke street and when I got to the end I made a “U turn”,
my turn was too sharp, I fell and it hurt so much. I guess thats what I
get for going down a big hill the first time riding without my training
wheels.
from then on I hated my bike, and was too scared of falling to ride it
again. I left my bike to sit in my dark garage, alone and unused. But
about three and a half years later I gave bike riding another chance,
being able to go down the big hill by my house without falling down and
now bike riding is one of my favorite activities.
Friday, September 13, 2013
two voices poem
Columbus
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Both
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Morning
girl
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I see a
girl in the water
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I see
strange men In a square canoe
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We see a
stranger
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I wish
to have gold and precious stones
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I wish
to have a sister
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We wish
to have something we don’t
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I
believe in god
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I
believe I can speak to spirits
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we
believe in a higher power
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I gave
the Indians red caps, glass beads and many other things of small value
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I gave
the visitors parrots, cotton thread, javelins, and many other things
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We gave
many things to the people we encountered
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I taste
the sea salt in the air
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I taste
the milk of a fresh coconut
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We taste
the tropics
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I feel
that I must succeed in the mission granted to me
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I feel
that I must protect my family
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We feel
that we are needed
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Friday, September 6, 2013
My nature name
If I got named based on what I like and how I act, I think my name would be Hazelnut, because I really like things with hazelnut in it like Nutella, or Hazelnut truffles, or Panda girl because my favorite animal has been pandas since I was really young.
Encyclopedia of an ordinary life entry #2
Christmas
Christmas reminds me of presents but I also remember one Christmas when I was plugging in the Christmas lights in the dark and my thumb got caught between plug and the socket and I got electrocuted, it really hurt.
Chickens
chickens remind me of when I was in the Philippines and I had to feed the many chickens at my grandmas house, they terrified me and I ended up running away from them and having my brother or sister do it from then on.
Sunday, September 1, 2013
140 word tweet memoir
In my first year of preschool we got excused to recess and everybody ran for a tricycle. I raced another girl, Sophie to the last one there. I beat her to it and felt proud.
Encyclopedia of an Ordinary Life
Brownie
Brownie reminds me of the pet pig that I had in the Philippines, I named my pig Brownie because of how it was brown and had different shades of brown spots on his back. After I left the Philippines Brownie had babies and I figured out that she was a boy
Hazel
I was named after my grandmother on my fathers side, I like my name because I don’t really meet people with the same name as mine. My name reminds me of eyes because some peoples eyes are the color of Hazel.
Nutella
I love to eat Nutella plain in a spoon, also just dipping pretzels into it, and putting Nutella on toast in the morning. I always have trouble deciding how to eat it though so I just do eenie meenie minie moe to choose which way to eat it.
I walk into my living room to get something
Perfectly good mood-- but then I run into the corner of an open drawer --instant bad mood
and it cuts my skin but not to the point that it bleeds
Friday, August 30, 2013
Monday, May 6, 2013
Poetry responses to A life misunderstood and I have seen
I really like the Poem A life misunderstood by Sophie Roberts, Throughout the poem she has great imagery and alliteration, I especially like the line when she says "I feel squished by fingers as fat as sausages". The poem is great and I really get the feeling of disgust when I read it because of her word choices and how she describes everything. I also love the line "I hear gags caused by revolting smell" . I love this type of poem because it takes an abstract noun and makes it seem like its a person, and it talks about what that abstract noun does. I really like the ending of Sophie's poem because it really satisfies the reader and gives them something to really think about after reading the poem.
I also really like the poem I have seen by Tia Collins, She also includes great imagery throughout the poem, It is great and it seems like the noun that she used was Happiness, because every verse has an event that are known to make people happy. I also really like how at the end of each line there is an approximate rhyme, I especially like the line when she says "In rain soaked earth a budding flower", I do think that she should change the verb used somewhere in the poem because she keeps it as I have seen through the entire thing. I also really like how Tia makes all of the lines rhyme but she manages to make them all fit together really well. Like Sophie's poem it had a satisfying ending and gave the reader something to think about.
I also really like the poem I have seen by Tia Collins, She also includes great imagery throughout the poem, It is great and it seems like the noun that she used was Happiness, because every verse has an event that are known to make people happy. I also really like how at the end of each line there is an approximate rhyme, I especially like the line when she says "In rain soaked earth a budding flower", I do think that she should change the verb used somewhere in the poem because she keeps it as I have seen through the entire thing. I also really like how Tia makes all of the lines rhyme but she manages to make them all fit together really well. Like Sophie's poem it had a satisfying ending and gave the reader something to think about.
Thursday, May 2, 2013
Brag Rap
My name is Hazel T.
and I rap out with Glee
Cause' I am oh so free
It's better than being planted like a tree
ya, I'm free
Don't you look stressed
wearing that pretty dress Don't worry just confess
That I am better than the rest
You think you got skill?
Well, I would like to see
if you can serve a ball better than me
Here comes the white ball
Rollin under the net
you better get ready cause I'm about to set
and I rap out with Glee
Cause' I am oh so free
It's better than being planted like a tree
ya, I'm free
Don't you look stressed
wearing that pretty dress Don't worry just confess
That I am better than the rest
You think you got skill?
Well, I would like to see
if you can serve a ball better than me
Here comes the white ball
Rollin under the net
you better get ready cause I'm about to set
Wednesday, May 1, 2013
Limericks
There once was a girl named Hazel who really liked to eat Basil
her salads were great
the ones that she ate
but it ended up affecting her nasal
There once was a girl with interior
who really liked her new mirror
she tripped and fell down
spread some dirt all around
but it ended up making it clearer
There once was a girl named Pria
who had a twin sister, Tia
they were the best of friends
but there came an end
when they fought over a guy named Aleah
her salads were great
the ones that she ate
but it ended up affecting her nasal
There once was a girl with interior
who really liked her new mirror
she tripped and fell down
spread some dirt all around
but it ended up making it clearer
There once was a girl named Pria
who had a twin sister, Tia
they were the best of friends
but there came an end
when they fought over a guy named Aleah
Isolation
I have seen nothingbut the empty dark of night
Nothing, but grey nothingness
Trapping me, keeping me from the rest of the world
Won’t something, anything care for me?
I am trapped in a closet left behind, forgotten
Like your old pair of neglected sneakers
Wishing for somebody toopen the doors and let the light in
Yet nobody cares whether I am ripped or falling apart they just leave me here to suffer
I’d rather be the growing warmth that you feel inside when happy
That everybody loves,and cares for
They may take it for granted but they can’t live without it
Or even the perfect,plump, red strawberry at the top of the bowl that everybody favors over theothers
I have tasted the unwanted taste you rinse out of your mouth in the morning
nobody likes it but I am forced to live with it in my mouth all of the time
I have learned to live, to be unwanted
for all i am is exactly that
Unwanted.
Thursday, April 25, 2013
Poetry response #3
http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/15444
I find the poem To Brooklyn Bridge interesting because it changes from talking all about the city and about the lights in the city, and about subways and elevators to talking about caravans, Prophets and the prayer of Pariah. I wouldn't think about including those topics in the same poem. I really like this verse of the poem
"Then, with inviolate curve, forsake our eyes as apparitional as sails that cross some page of figures to be filed away --Till elevators drop us from our day...." I like that part because., of how he fits in internal rhymes and assonant's in and they don't seem forced at all. I like the poem because it all flows together really well.
I find the poem To Brooklyn Bridge interesting because it changes from talking all about the city and about the lights in the city, and about subways and elevators to talking about caravans, Prophets and the prayer of Pariah. I wouldn't think about including those topics in the same poem. I really like this verse of the poem
"Then, with inviolate curve, forsake our eyes as apparitional as sails that cross some page of figures to be filed away --Till elevators drop us from our day...." I like that part because., of how he fits in internal rhymes and assonant's in and they don't seem forced at all. I like the poem because it all flows together really well.
Then, with inviolate curve, forsake our eyes
As apparitional as sails that cross
Some page of figures to be filed away;
--Till elevators drop us from our day . . . - See more at: http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/15444#sthash.7qELT31B.dpuf
Then, with inviolate curve, forsake our eyes
As apparitional as sails that cross
Some page of figures to be filed away;
--Till elevators drop us from our day . . . - See more at: http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/15444#sthash.7qELT31B.dpuf
Then, with inviolate curve, forsake our eyes
As apparitional as sails that cross
Some page of figures to be filed away;
--Till elevators drop us from our day . . . - See more at: http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/15444#sthash.7qELT31B.dpuf
Then, with inviolate curve, forsake our eyes
As apparitional as sails that cross
Some page of figures to be filed away;
--Till elevators drop us from our day . . . - See more at: http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/15444#sthash.7qELT31B.dpuf
Wednesday, April 24, 2013
Poetry response #2
In the poem descriptions of heaven and hell because of how he worded the beginning I liked how he described it and how he begins it especially. I am confused on how he knew he was in hell, when it said “the wave breaks and i'm carried into it”, I would think that he was carried into heaven, but he says that right then he knew that he was carried into hell. I don’t get how he hears his father's laughter though, is his father in hell with him? I think that he may be, because after that he starts talking about what “irked” him, which was “asking what is beyond death?” his theory once was that love greets you and the love greets you, and the loveless don't know what to say.” I think it may just mean that since the loveless isn’t greeted by anybody they just don’t have anything to say.
In this poem the title is The descriptions of Heaven and Hell, but where does it describe Heaven? I think that he may be saying that he is in Heaven when he says “yet my father laughs, chest deep proving i’m wrong. we’re safely rooted, rocked on his toes.” I think that when he says that they are “rooted safely, rocked on his toes.” Since they are safe they might be in heaven.
Tuesday, April 23, 2013
Haikus
Fall
The Crackle of leaves
As one falls in front
of me
The sun starts to set
Winter
The chilling breeze
blows,
I look at the
leafless trees
And start to shiver
Nature in General
Beautiful flowers
Lovely, crisp, and
natural
Makes me feel so good
Everyday life
It goes on and on
Society is a rut
You just have to live
Thursday, April 18, 2013
Abstract and concrete noun poem
Happiness is a perfect, red Strawberry
Boredom is plain grey school days keeping you from the fun
Anger is a ferocity, red as roses
Joy is a bright pink warmth that brightens your day
Loneliness is an infinite black abyss that you try to avoid
apathy is murky, green still water
Fear is a desperate magenta insect avoiding your steps
confusion is the fading memories in the back of your mind
Thursday, April 11, 2013
I really like the poem http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/21421, I really like the repetition throughout the poem and how its not as confusing as a lot of other poems by E.E Cummings. In many other poems by him, he mixes up the words or puts parentheses around certain sentences and you have to read the poem several times to figure out what it means. To me this poem is easier to read mainly because of how it doesn't mix up the words as much, it still has parentheses, which I still don't know what are for, but it doesn't really affect much of the poem
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